Ode to my Bed.
After the grind, day after day
I so desire just to lay
In my bed, with worries at bay
Wanting to sleep the night away
starts;. I stuff you in my drawer
For I try to ignore your roar
My room feels like a giant freezer
Let me cuddle my golden retriever
If you look at the examples of an ode, you find that the lines concern themselves with precise description of the thing itself. It's still in keeping with the idea of opinion and evidence. You can't say your bed is great unless we know every last detail about it. Is it twin? king? Are there cotton sheets? Flannel? What kind of comparisons would help us see how awesome it is?
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